Thread:UvronSwiftfoot/@comment-37459757-20181116140558

I am thinking of making a story from my perspective.

What do guys think of the first part?

'''I spawned in the desolate wasteland and laughed at my bad luck. It wouldn’t take me that long to get to the river, but it would take time. I started on my journey and soon came upon a pack of wolves which were hungry for human flesh. I walked towards them and they turned to stare at me. I ran the towards the my tool hammer at the ready. Undeterred the wolves came at me; I swung left and right smashing my hammer into their snarling grey faces. They yelped but kept coming. They landed several hits on me, and my life bar started depleting. I was finally doing some damage to the vicious beasts, and the Wolves fell to the ground. I skinned the corpses and ate the much-needed food my life bar went back to 100 percent, and I continued on my journey.'''

'''I came across a small shop and I went up to it. Inside the hut were several hats and accessories that would give me certain advantages. I picked out a monkey tail that gives me super speed, but I didn’t equip it yet.'''

'''I then figured out that there were more powerful weapons than the mere hammer I carried. I could make daggers, a sword, a spear, an axe, a bat, and a stick. The daggers made it so I can mine really quickly and get the needed supplies. Knowing this I choose it, and I continued on.'''

'''I then came across Noob101 collecting berries from a bush. I remembered that I didn’t have much food myself, but he couldn’t be that strong. I yelled at him saying, “Howdy, wanna die today?”'''

'''I ran up to and slashed and cut him; he had no idea what to do. I happily walked away from the scene; he was my first kill of the day. Then seeing a two trees that were close together, I ran over to it and began striking repeatedly in quick succession. I chopped off slabs of wood that I would use later. '''

'''I  swiftly advanced in knowledge. I acquired the expertise on how to make Cookies, Boost Pads, Greater Spikes, a Hunting Bow, a Teleporter, a Crossbow, and finally a Repeater Crossbow, my prized possession.'''

P.S. Have you seen what the Repeater Crossbow actually looks like in real life? 