Thread:LOAdING......GN!PV07/@comment-28056078-20190205053721/@comment-28056078-20190210232013

Ok, errors with Daniel's new part;

-Where the hell is 46?

-Caliphate is the kingdom, not the title of the leader

-I am the leader of the "Caliphate of the Mujahideen"

-I mean, if you're gonna make me as the character I am in my story, it wouldn't make sense for me to not be able to win a 3v6 fight against hackers when in my story I was able to fight in a 10v100 fight against hackers

-"Jihad" is a term which means "to struggle." It does not mean "holy war" as some people have translated it. Literally, anything that requires a struggle is Jihad. Doing your homework is Jihad. Waking up to go to work is Jihad. Caring for your parents is one of the greatest forms of Jihad.

-"By Mohammed(actually spelled "Muhammad")'s 7th wife" is NOT an expression used in Islam. It is actually an insulting and even racist expression as usually, people say something like "by God." By saying that expression, you mean to equate Juwayriyah bint al-Haarith to God, and by extension, Muhammad to God. This is an outrage, as Muslims worship only God and none other than God himself. To Him is no partner. Muhammad is not God, he only conveyed God's message, and by saying that, you are insulting him. Not to mention, you mention this in a derogatory way which doesn't shed light onto the reasons behind his marriages, and you just overall make him look bad.

-Why would you make more characters go rogue and make more characters die? We don't need that.

So after this review, I can decide that this is Strike Two on your part. You get one more chance to edit your part of the story, and judging by how well or how bad you do it this time, I will either:

A. Accept it. B. Edit it. C. Delete it.

You have one week.