Thread:DaDragonSavage/@comment-33093264-20190209074231/@comment-28056078-20190209221328

At that point in the story-

Poke is dead.

Patrik is outside by the trees, unconscious.

Herro is outside by the trees, unconscious.

Daniel is fighting 6 hackers.

Loading was killed by those 6 hackers.

46 just killed the Hacker leader.

Uvron is fighting the 6 hackers with Daniel.

Cofefe was a hacker and got killed.

Wither is frozen in shock at Loading's death.

Salt is outside by the trees, unconscious.

Hakeemollah is with Daniel and Uvron fighting those 6 hackers.

So in your part; you made Herro the villain and you ignored me and Uvron.

To fix it, remove Herro as the villain and rather make it so that it is a hacker fighting you, me and Uvron.